The Hallelujah Scenerio *NPAC Nominee April '03*
Brambleberry dazeSouthern Comfort gallonscounting off the rosaryA sermon of dulled sensesof riding horsebackGodiva stylewith no taxation to protestThe impositionnuns look towardspriestsin black slacks...
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*awesome* I loved this - it sizzled on the page *bravo*"Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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Wow, what an interesting read. I read a book a couple years ago and this poem reminded me of it, kinda neat how close it was. Anyway, nicely done, I enjoyed reading this a lot! PS - I don't drink that...
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This almost feels like it was written after indulging a little...it has that surreal quality to it...and a bitingly accurate dig at the ease of penance in this day and age...repent today, sin again...
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This simply ROCKS my world!!! I am so loving this!!!*Tosses back a shot of hail mary's and chases it with whiskey* DAMN fine writing!!!GaladrielTo transform the world, we must begin with ourselves....
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Hi Erik,Oh boy! Hot stuff righteously written with loads of spunk! Much enjoyed... thanks for sharing.......sutured
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whew!! absolutely outstanding, erik ...! yeah! I needed this read this morning ... thank you!Breathe, breathe in the air. Don't be afraid to care. Leave, but don't leave me. Look around; choose your...
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Valoemy thanks to youglad that you thought thisawesomeERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient ship in a...
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MWKMy thanks to youI am glad this made you think of that bookMuch thanksERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an...
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Soulseasemy thanks to youfor the readwordset alI am very happy that you likedthis oneERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood...
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GaladrielSo glad this rocked your worldbe careful not to stumble ERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient ship...
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sutured Thanks for taking the time to readonce things are offered as shareit takes another to accept that shareand I am glad that you didERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just...
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JMLMy pleasureI am glad that this was what the doctor ordered for youERikI write your nameWith thick blue inkOn stones I throw just to watch 'em sinkI write your nameOn a great wood beamOn an ancient...
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lmao...Erik, i have to laugh!! This is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and right up my alley...congrats on the nomination...it's well deserved."The greatest way to live with honor in this world is to be what...
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Conclusivegood to see youthanks for the read and the wordsglad you got a chuckle from this oneERikSearching for our true believers please count me as onebut you know I cant be your saviour cause I...
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